Context- On March
18th 1916, Second Lieutenant David Cuthbert Thomas was shot in the neck while
repairing the barbed wire in front of the front-line trenches. Initially, his
wounds were not thought to be life-threatening, but he died a few hours later.
He served with Siegfried Sassoon and Robert Graves, both of whom admired him
greatly.
Nature
imagery- Sassoon uses many
references to nature such as “chestnuts
stood”, “Dark in their noble canopies of leaves”, “But he will loom above me
like a tree,”, “the peace / of sanctuary, austerely built of trees,” and “ i
knew him crushed to earth in scentless flowers / and lifted in the rapture of
dark pines.” this nature imagery is used throughout. I think this could be used
to highlight the contrast between the living nature and the death of David
Thomas and so many other soldiers.
Simile-
“he will loom above me like a
tree,” This could be showing that he see’s Davis Thomas as bigger and superior
to him and that e looks up to him. Or that because he has dies and now become
part of the earth Sassoon feels like he is part of nature.
Enjambment-
enjambment is used throughout the poem this could be to show Sassoon’s
disorganised irrational state of mind after the death of his friend. Alternatively
this could be used to show the unorganised never ending state of the war.
Short
sentence- “He was old.” This could be reflecting the short life the old
man has left or alternatively it could be putting emphasis on the fact that he
is old because Sassoon is upset that his friend will never get the chance to
grow old now much like many other soldiers.
Alliteration- “hold his human ghost” i think this is used to emphasise how impossible
this statement is, as a ghost is not a physical object and is not hold-able, it
is also not alive so is not human. This could show that Sassoon does not care
that David is dead he will do anything to be with him.
Romy, your comments are very concise about the poem; you have analysed language well here. Keep it up!
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